拿捏得體

摯友敢將歲月掌中握

誰人要把江山胸裏藏

冰心皎潔揮筆心燦爛

大氣凜然拔刀氣鏗鏘

格律體新詩●九絕羅志海著譯

第11091首對聯體詩2020年12月7日

Control Appropriately

My bosom friend dares to holdyears in his palm

Who wants to hide themountains and rivers in his chest?

The atmosphere is aweinspiring to draw a sword

it’s sonorous

The ice heart is splendid

it bright and clean to wielda pen

Metric New Poetry ● Nine Wordsof Quatrain by Luo Zhihai

The 11,091th Two Pairs ofCouplets, 12/7/2020

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/control-appropriately/

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